In addition to the feedback I received from my target audience, I obtained further feedback from two media teachers. The first teacher told me to improve certain aspects already identified by many members of the target audience. This included perfecting the cuts, adding a darker filter to the footage of Michael and adding more shots to cross cut with the 'camera footage'. Furthermore, increasing the volume of the music in the background was another key point. These improvements have been made where appropriate.
After asking for feedback from my second teacher, I was given advice to make minor adjustments to elements of the film. For example, I needed to make the sound of the twig breaking quieter to realistically show that the snap is happening further out into the distance. I also needed to marginally adjust the music by turning the volume up ever so slightly. At the beginning when we see the 'nature' shots, I used the sound from the final clip so the sound was constant. The more significant adjustment I had to make was to play around with the footage of the 'psycho people' and how quick and often these shots would appear. I varied this so that the audience will feel uncomfortable watching that specific part of the film.
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